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As for my next book, I won't write it till it has grown heavy in my mind like a ripe pear; pendant, gravid, asking to be cut or it will fall.

Another poem.

Be Near Me

Faiz Ahmed Faiz
Translated by Naomi Lazard

Be near me now,
My tormenter, my love, be near me—
At this hour when night comes down,
When, having drunk from the gash of sunset, darkness comes
With the balm of musk in its hands, its diamond lancets,
When it comes with cries of lamentation,
                                             with laughter with songs;
Its blue-gray anklets of pain clinking with every step.
At this hour when hearts, deep in their hiding places,
Have begun to hope once more, when they start their vigil
For hands still enfolded in sleeves;
When wine being poured makes the sound
                                             of inconsolable children
                      who, though you try with all your heart,
                                             cannot be soothed.
When whatever you want to do cannot be done,
When nothing is of any use;
—At this hour when night comes down,
When night comes, dragging its long face,
                                             dressed in mourning,
Be with me,
My tormenter, my love, be near me.

November 28th, 2009

Comments:

Comment #1 by Bodhisattva Harlem Mama on December 5, 2009 - 9:07am

How perfect. I felt like someone put in words what I thought no words could describe.

Comment #2 by Poptropica on December 16, 2009 - 3:14am

thanks for your information!!

Comment #3 by fairy lady on January 12, 2010 - 10:26am

Thanks for taking the time to share this poem with us. Its very moving.

Comment #4 by banner stands on March 6, 2010 - 8:15pm

Nice poem. Can I copy parts of this poem for my English assignment?

Comment #5 by drupal themes on March 22, 2010 - 12:09pm

Nice poem. It reminds me of a poem wrote by my gf to me :)

Comment #6 by Masquerade Masks on April 15, 2010 - 4:48pm

"Its blue-gray anklets of pain clinking with every step.
At this hour when hearts, deep in their hiding places,
Have begun to hope once more, when they start their vigil"

That is my favorite part of the poem. This was very moving for me, it has alot of meaning that takes a little thought to decipher and appreciate fully :)

Great blog BTW :)

Best,

Conrad

The Masquerade Masks Man

Comment #7 by Masquerade Dresses on April 25, 2010 - 10:04pm

'Be Near Me' is such a beautiful yet concise title, I just had to say that!

Comment #8 by Phantom of the Opera Mask on April 25, 2010 - 10:05pm

I love the subtlety of this poem, it really conveys the message without being overbearing, loves it!

Comment #9 by White Corset on May 12, 2010 - 3:35pm

This poem has a lot of symbolism in it, and the progression is very engaging. Great writing! Thank you :)

Tom

Comment #10 by Bookshelf Speakers on May 28, 2010 - 3:45pm

Hi Rebecca, I love your blog, nothing but great writing, pictures, and poems :)

How do you get those random comments in the header of your site? I think that is so cool!

Best,

Tom

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