Another poem.
Be Near Me
Faiz Ahmed Faiz
Translated by Naomi Lazard
Be near me now,
My tormenter, my love, be near me—
At this hour when night comes down,
When, having drunk from the gash of sunset, darkness comes
With the balm of musk in its hands, its diamond lancets,
When it comes with cries of lamentation,
with laughter with songs;
Its blue-gray anklets of pain clinking with every step.
At this hour when hearts, deep in their hiding places,
Have begun to hope once more, when they start their vigil
For hands still enfolded in sleeves;
When wine being poured makes the sound
of inconsolable children
who, though you try with all your heart,
cannot be soothed.
When whatever you want to do cannot be done,
When nothing is of any use;
—At this hour when night comes down,
When night comes, dragging its long face,
dressed in mourning,
Be with me,
My tormenter, my love, be near me.





Comments:
How perfect. I felt like someone put in words what I thought no words could describe.
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Thanks for taking the time to share this poem with us. Its very moving.
Nice poem. Can I copy parts of this poem for my English assignment?
Nice poem. It reminds me of a poem wrote by my gf to me :)
"Its blue-gray anklets of pain clinking with every step.
At this hour when hearts, deep in their hiding places,
Have begun to hope once more, when they start their vigil"
That is my favorite part of the poem. This was very moving for me, it has alot of meaning that takes a little thought to decipher and appreciate fully :)
Great blog BTW :)
Best,
Conrad
The Masquerade Masks Man
'Be Near Me' is such a beautiful yet concise title, I just had to say that!
I love the subtlety of this poem, it really conveys the message without being overbearing, loves it!
This poem has a lot of symbolism in it, and the progression is very engaging. Great writing! Thank you :)
Tom
Hi Rebecca, I love your blog, nothing but great writing, pictures, and poems :)
How do you get those random comments in the header of your site? I think that is so cool!
Best,
Tom
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